Added some potential phrasing and formatting suggestions by jyaistMap · Pull Request #2313 · Esri/arcgis-python-api

@jyaistMap unfortunately nbreview did the thing where it counts the entire notebook as new instead of just your changes, so I can't really tell what specifically you did. However, reading over it all, it looks good, minus the one hyperlink with the weird formatting. Were there any notable changes you made or just random little words here and there?